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In the Shy of Light
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In the Shy of Light |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 In the Shy of Light there is a moment of peace that with vibration softly hums when first the earliest light of shy green sunrise comes nanosecond split of light breaking 'way from the night in this moment, shy of day as verdant eyes come to play not many see this emerald revealed in sunrise's prism first unveiled except those who arise with thee come stand in early, watch with me then through the passage of the day the Sun attends its charted way there is a moment of peace around that with vibration softly sounds when first the sunset shimmers last and purple first comes to cast soft twilight filters over all and takes with it into the night the set of day in all its bright soft now into this purple twilight and in this peace come to me cherish always how it should be that as day has passed to the night glowing eyes gleam in shy of light © KRJ 12-16-00 Slightly revised 7-19-10 " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Sunshine, I will have to write several chapter in response. But thank you for letting me see the sunrise and sunset, the sight of which the blind are said to be deprived, through your poetic soul. I couldn't stand for this one to have 0 replies and wanted it to have at mine!!! So many hugs for the Light of Sunshine! Hey, nobody's human! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is just beautiful, Sunshine. I think it is my all-time favorite of yours. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this reminds me of my "view from here" very well revised! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very nice, and a gorgeous photo, too. We don't get the "green flash" phenomenon here much, because of the commonly high humidity. |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
beautiful |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The flash of emerald..the morning sun.. come summer in KS sometimes the best time of day to be out is dawn... you paint it well ma'am... |
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sunnyh Junior Member
since 2008-01-07
Posts 14Staffordshire, England |
Hello my friend, I love to rise early, before the sun shows that prism of first light. There's a special kind of peace that comes to one in those moments... Enjoyed as always, Sunnyh (aka sunnyone) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...always a pleasure to view through the glass as you decorate your pen.. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Beautiful. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
absolutely beautiful |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I totally agree, Just beautiful! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
superbly painted Karilea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The sunrises are beautiful here in the morning when I drive to work. Sometimes, I just want to pull the car over to inhale every speck of the beauty. They must be incredibly beautiful over the vast plains of Kansas! Enjoyed your poem and picture! misC |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I do enjoy a Kansas dawn and poetry that just justice to the break of day. |
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