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Open Poetry #46
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Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
Posts 177
Alabama
0 posted 2010-07-19 04:53 PM


The light is so bright, she cannot see.
A gentle hand takes hers and he begins to lead.
The music swells, filled with strings.
Yet she can hear bells, tiny and pure, ringing.
Around and around they sway and swing.
She can feel the clouds under her feet.
Now his face comes into view.
Oh, agape love, her heart is so full it bursts
and she becomes a shower of stars.
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
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1 posted 2010-07-20 04:16 AM

Thanks, well-crafted. Now that's the kind of dream to wake up from smiling.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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2 posted 2010-07-20 09:27 AM

I like bells,
the sound of ringing,
and angels.

So you have me from
beginning
to end.
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793
3 posted 2010-07-20 09:59 AM

another well met challenge it would seem!
much lighter by far than the previous dance.
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