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Parallel hearts at night (paralelní srdce v noci)
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Parallel hearts at night (paralelní srdce v noci) |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
I miss those nights those nights when... we would stay up late chatting over the internet almost like a date when our minds are tired and all our thinking, all our worries are... out the window and it's just you and me staring at the screen waiting to see what the other will say and its just us and its just our hearts speaking vulnerable and sweet It's the way you looked at me over that last sip of cider that smile, that sweet gentle smile It's how we felt smelling the sweet leaves in the tea garden you waving the scent sweetly under our noses those moments of us come together they just happen naturally It's how I feel now sitting on my window sill thinking of you in the cool air night looking at the stars writing to you in the pale blue light It's the way we would feel in each other's arms It's the way we feel just before sleep. It's the way we would feel in bed. It's how I feel when I write to you it's how you feel when you think of me... gently, sweetly at night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember thinking this same thing at one time (a brief time though)...and then I married him  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Another exquisite portrayal of human feelings an thoughts, written with the delicacy of a master painter of words. Once again, I applaud you, friend poet.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done indeed.... a pleasure to let the eyes and mind follow your path here.. |
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Eterne Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 75Quebec, Canada |
"I miss those nights those nights when... we would stay up late chatting over the internet almost like a date" Yep, I miss them too... Nice work! |
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