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Open Poetry #46

A Single Tear

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-07-16 05:38 PM

I remember the time we said goodbye.
A single tear fell from your eye.
My love was going away.
On a distant trip today.

Her nearness she knew I would surely miss.
Upon my head she placed a kiss.
Even though she left today.
Her heart never did go away.

Upon a TWA jet she flew.
Up in the sky so blue.
A love so true.
I could still feel her kiss as the wind blew.

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

1 posted 2010-07-16 05:44 PM

very nice.

Joe

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-07-17 04:04 AM

This is nicely written.

Say, I remember TWA, and open observation decks.

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

3 posted 2010-07-21 03:48 AM

Very nicely written, brought memories of someone in my life

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