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Faithless. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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Her hair was dark blonde, nearly brown it fell in swells, tall and rolling. She undid my belt like it was a brown leather lid to her prescription for sexual health She bit my chin in the dark tasting the motor oil in my beard, she laughed a little and kissed my chest. She felt like the heartbeat of summer her skin was clean, in every place I had not touched. Her smile warmed the dark filling my body with blood, my lungs with air. Her hair was dark blonde, nearly brown it fell in swells, tall and rolling. She walked away that morning, leaving me to my belt and the rest of my life. ___________________________________ Bad Habits... Strikes Back. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no way to quote a favorite part, i love all of this....  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The memory is strong and expressed with power, though she left you to the rest of your life. Impressive. Motor oil in the beard? A new aphrodosiac?  This series is very cute you know. Love, Margopargo  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Susea.... thanks very much. I'm glad you liked liked it!Margopargo, I don't think most people are into it. Glad you enjoyed.Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Each poem tells a bit more about you .. if we choose to open our eyes to the words you share. What a loss for those who don't make that choice. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you, dearest Alaboo. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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