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Open Poetry #46

I am getting tired...

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2010-07-15 02:29 AM

I am getting tired of worn out love songs
whittled to nothingness by cacophony of time
and the selfsame refrains ----

now I wish to be silent;
take you into my arms
and carry you
until we both become
weightless…

will that do?

CG

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2010-07-15 09:40 AM

"now I wish to be silent;
take you into my arms
and carry you
until we both become
weightless…"

sounds sweet

M

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-07-15 12:45 PM

I find it a worthy sentiment, and well-put in these words. Shan't attempt to answer the question, but I will aver that wishing to share wordless thoughts of love and wonder, even unto passage into pure spirit form, is not a sin.

As for simulated weightlessness, well, heh... There are a few pics online, including the "first weightless wedding", in a rented NASA aircraft, IIRC. I sometimes look up such things.

Like this poem a lot.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2010-07-15 06:28 PM

Sound good to me.
Ida

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2010-07-15 07:40 PM

M-thank you

easy1-thank you for reading and commenting
Hmm.."simulated weightlessness"..
should I falter
THAT may have to do..

Ida-thank you

CG

rosepetals36
Member

since 2010-07-09

Posts 137
Pa

5 posted 2010-07-15 09:41 PM

I like this

<b>-- Used to be rosepetals25 before I tried to change my email lol</b>

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