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After the Storms...
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After the Storms... |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
After the Storms Roots of forgiveness Anchored my soul Quest for awareness Of what couldn't be seen Swayed within my thoughts Of different choices That I would make Knowing that the consequences Would come as the lessons To refine my selfish heart and humble my pride So when I felt low Was when I was teachable And the sun seemed to rise Just a little bit higher The morning after... ...the storms had passed |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
An excellent write. I read it as a treatise on rage and redemptive aftermath, therefore, a much-appreciated identification with the sublime. Plus, I like the gentle way this conclusion is reached by the author. One for the compendium! |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Thanks for your in depth comments Easy1..ww |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellence and wisdom all in one poem. I like your style, whisperingwalt. Ida |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Great write- deep and sensitive and very insightful- words of wisdom. EBM |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
well written and very, very true |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I agree, insightfull. Kat >^..^< |
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