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Open Poetry #46

A SUMMER STORM

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2010-07-14 02:25 PM

Rain runs off my neck
down my back and along my spine
shimmering on my skin
clinging to my legs
gathering patience
and desire

Electricity fills the air
sizzles and fires across the senses
stirring passion
shifting power
moving all over
pulling me along
in its wake

If I don't say it...who will?

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-07-14 07:28 PM

niiice imagery~

rosepetals36
Member

since 2010-07-09

Posts 137
Pa

2 posted 2010-07-14 10:53 PM

I like

<b>-- Used to be rosepetals25 before I tried to change my email lol</b>

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2010-07-14 11:37 PM

Yes, well done.
Ida

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

4 posted 2010-07-15 09:27 AM

Thank you all very much!

If I don't say it...who will?

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