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Open Poetry #46

Patience

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-07-13 10:36 AM

It is now only a matter of hours we wait
and for now I write using overly melodramatic words and tone
to describe the anticipation, the countdown

and all I can feel is lazy
seeking answers for the moment
where there are none

the joy the elation
or unfulfilled expectations
that may come with the reunion

answer answers
ne, more questions
the what nexts...

or shall we dance
in the moment
her presence, my smile, washing all the debris away

the consequences
the unresolved disputes
feelings

if I could be a fly on the wall of that car right now...
I still wouldn't understand what they were saying
I don't speak Czech

but I do read body language
I do know the sound and depiction of spoken emotion

and what goes round in her pretty little head
consequences, fears, what ifs, the past

ne, ne
what matters is the present
and what your future will be

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-07-13 01:30 PM

hello martiniat, thanks for the original way of travelling, a very original look towards the world. thanks for sharing.

yann

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-07-16 12:49 PM

Good advice.

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