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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-07-13 08:20 AM


When I gaze into you baby blue eyes
My knees start to shake.
When your in my sight
My mind starts to wonder about could there be a us
My heart fills up with fright
When will this strange feeling stop??
When did it start?
Can I listen to my heart and get close to you with out breaking my heart?
I'm so confused on what to do?
I know that I love you,
But I don't know how to tell you.
What should I do?
I can't think of anything?
But the way it could be if you love me too?
Should I ignore my heart that is telling me to get close to you?
Oh so many things on my mind?
Like do you love me to?
I think I'm going crazy wondering if you want me to?
These are the things that go though my mind,
When I see you
I confused, I think I'm going to let my heart decide my faith,
Of this path?
Please say you love me to

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1 posted 2010-07-13 09:17 AM


danged baby blues can get you every time...

questions you ask I think we all have asked in some way, at some time...


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2 posted 2010-07-13 10:51 AM


they say better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all...I think whoever said that probably was into getting their but kicked for pleasure, but who knows..enjoyed your heart showing ms
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3 posted 2010-07-13 04:29 PM


Heart aches and heart breaks are too close to be believed.
This is a very good write, and one that I enjoyed reading...
You are really decent at showing the reader what's inside your mind.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

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4 posted 2010-07-13 09:40 PM


Well thank you everyone, but Ringo, there isn't much goin on in my mind lately... it's been kinda confused and or on vacation. I haven't figured which one yet... I'm just sorta kinda doin what I feel is right anymore... just hope I'm doin the right thing.

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5 posted 2010-07-19 12:11 PM


You know, I think confusion bites, and I think you expresed it well.  I have been there.

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