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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
When I gaze into you baby blue eyes My knees start to shake. When your in my sight My mind starts to wonder about could there be a us My heart fills up with fright When will this strange feeling stop?? When did it start? Can I listen to my heart and get close to you with out breaking my heart? I'm so confused on what to do? I know that I love you, But I don't know how to tell you. What should I do? I can't think of anything? But the way it could be if you love me too? Should I ignore my heart that is telling me to get close to you? Oh so many things on my mind? Like do you love me to? I think I'm going crazy wondering if you want me to? These are the things that go though my mind, When I see you I confused, I think I'm going to let my heart decide my faith, Of this path? Please say you love me to |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
danged baby blues can get you every time... questions you ask I think we all have asked in some way, at some time... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
they say better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all...I think whoever said that probably was into getting their but kicked for pleasure, but who knows..enjoyed your heart showing ms |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Heart aches and heart breaks are too close to be believed. This is a very good write, and one that I enjoyed reading... You are really decent at showing the reader what's inside your mind. Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Well thank you everyone, but Ringo, there isn't much goin on in my mind lately... it's been kinda confused and or on vacation. I haven't figured which one yet... I'm just sorta kinda doin what I feel is right anymore... just hope I'm doin the right thing. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, I think confusion bites, and I think you expresed it well. I have been there. A |
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