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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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0 posted 2010-07-13 02:26 AM


Dream eternal
We will awaken to you...
eventually
and leave behind
this bland reality
we mistake for truth.

               Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2010 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
bel1e
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1 posted 2010-07-13 06:22 AM


Lovely!

         

easy1
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2 posted 2010-07-16 12:34 PM


A true pleasure to read.
miscellanea
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OH
3 posted 2010-07-16 11:32 PM


Very pretty, Ida!

           misce'

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2010-07-17 03:24 AM


Absolutely right, Ida!  I suspect, however, that we will make another bland reality but my decision now is to fight it with all my might.  Sadly, however, I'll probably leave that decision behind as well.

Helen

Amaryllis
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5 posted 2010-07-17 08:36 PM


Beautiful!
~Amaryllis

vandana
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6 posted 2010-07-18 11:14 AM


nice read
passing shadows
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7 posted 2010-07-18 12:43 PM


this is good! Love it Ida
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2010-07-18 09:07 PM


I always enjoy comments from other poets and there are some very talented poets on this site. I thank you.
                           Ida

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