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Painted scenes
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Painted scenes |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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PAINTED SCENES Our lives in part are painted scenes of dreams we carry dear Small sections of a masterpiece we work on through each year With fantasies and passions, our gateway to our hope The mind and palette dance to paint a scene that helps us cope Amazing life and how we live, the things we think within each day The things we visualise might be, and how we go along our way We work and play in wonder; accepting much but still we dream Again a prayer, a glint of light, again the dance, and what a scene! By Rick Van Weenen © 2010 |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is so true, and every time we fall down, we seem to get up and dance! Nicely done. Words are weapons, toss them with care. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Beautiful as always dear friend. You are the Rembrandt with words! Always nice to see you hear Rick, hope all is fab with you and the fam! Richard  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Perfect,Rick! M |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very meaningful write |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A great poem old cobber, you certainly haven't lost your touch of brilliance. Most enjoyable read. Take care and see you next Sunday, Lindsay |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Lamar, thanks for your visit and reply Dear Mysteria, it's always nice to dance my friend, thank you for your words here, appreciated. Richy, always good to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your comments mate, take care. Thanks M, again good to see you here. D.Lester, thank you for your time and comment. To you all my friends, thank you for your visit, once again very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
loved all of your lines Rick.. very beautiful and very real! Hugs RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ah Rick, friend, yes, I agree! Nice to read you again!! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, thank you so much for your visit here my friend and your reply, enjoyed. Dear Dixie, hope you are doing well my friend, thank you for your visit here and comment. Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, sorry I forgot to send you a thank you for your reply mate, did not realise, always very much appreciate your visit Lindsay, be well and take care. Rick |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick, This has special meaning for me as I go through a time of family healing. It's beautiful and perceptive. It's a keeper for sure. Thank you, once again, for sharing. Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, thank you for your visit today, lovely to see you and read your comment, I hope you are well and enjoying life as much as you can. Rick |
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