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Open Poetry #46
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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274
0 posted 2010-07-05 02:45 PM

White clouds,
Morning breeze,
Ripples in the pond,
Dancing trees.

Tall grass blowing.
Our love growing.
Sunlight shimmering.
Sweet love simmering.
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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-07-05 07:49 PM

sounds like a summer day. Very nice.
Kat  >^..^<
Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
Posts 246
2 posted 2010-07-06 03:57 AM

White clouds, ripples and dancing trees-- boucy and bubbling. Then this sweet smooth summer love. Reading your poem is like drinking champagne. Bravo!
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2010-07-07 09:49 PM


Short but very sweet Lamar, enjoyed.

Lindsay
Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2010-07-10 09:40 PM

Lovely
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