Open Poetry #46 |
Bones First Night On The Farm |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
The social worker lady drives Bones out to his new home on the farm. The social worker lady introduces Bones to his new family. “I’m afraid he’s a little upset.” “Awww, of course he is, poor little guy.” After the social worker lady leaves, the general demeanor of the farmer changes abruptly. The farmer slaps Bones across the face and tells him to stop his bawling. The farmer grabs Bones by the scruff of the neck, and pushes him up two flights of stairs. Bones is shoved into a cold room lit by a single 40 watt light bulb. There’s an old Army cot in the room. There’s an alarm clock with a glowing green face sitting beside the cot. The farmer slams the door shut, and locks it. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Traumatic experiences like this one will never ever fade away. How many children were abused like this by seemingly benevolent people (in the social workers' eyes)? Oh, too many! Very sad testimony, dear Bobby. Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - seems Bones was put in with the wrong farmer. One Bones can't have experienced all that has been written about him, or can it... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Yes, you are correct. Of course Bones died rather young, so he never got a chance to get over it. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, My friend Bones never got to school that year. He was too busy with farm work. You're right, it was the wrong farmer. It's a dice roll. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I wanted to say "another time - another life" .. then I thought what a platitude that actually is. I think one reason my heart breaks for Bones is because this still does happen. Bobby, your gift to us is making us think, open our eyes, and stop with the platitudes. Thank you. Love, Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, Yes, it does still happen all the time--and that is what's very sad. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bobby, violence has to be condemned, your experience is an intolerable cruelty, there is no words for abused children. regards yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, What you say is true. When they are abused, children feel so much alone. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The abuse that children suffer is intolerable. Bones would agree. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, What you say is very true. Bones/Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
By golly Bobby I hope Bones is going to write his autobiography before someone renders him unable. It will be a best seller for sure. Lindsay |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Mamma bear Amaryllis wishes she could protect ALL the children out there in need of a mamma bear!!! .Grrrrr ~Amaryllis |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
During the depression many many children were sent out to farmers because the parents in the cities could not feed them. many of those kids never found their parents again. They sent trains filled out to farms. It was a very sad time. latearrival |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Lindsay, For the kind words to Bones. He's working on his autobiography. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Amaryllis, Bones and I wish you could too. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Latearrival, You are correct, it was a sad time. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
your poem is fascinating, your poems so descriptive...thanks for it. regards yann |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Truly that is/was the wrong farm and the wrong farmer. Yet, any child of any age who suffers tyrranical mistreatment is in the same locked room. I hope Bones hitched a ride with some better people and got out of there... This vignette deserves a continuation, perhaps in the (auto)biography? Abuse of power |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - how sad this is about Bones. Living on a farm should be a happy time, in my opinion... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm very pleased that the poem worked well for you. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Easy1, Bones did get out of there, and he's now doing very well. You are correct, it was the wrong farm, and the wrrong farmer. All of my work is autobiographical to some extent. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, Yes, the farm should be a happy place. However, such is not always the case. Bobby |
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