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forth of july |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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her name was july and she could read my eyes how I wanted more than just an afternoon and a bottle of whiskey kind of woman that only leaves one emptier over time I guess I was obvious in my agreement but she mentioned she could not give more then a part of herself since she had before the majority had been otherwise assigned to three other husbands that were not worthy but took from her anyway until she was empty and then went in search of other nourshment somewhere else to feed on someone else's soul it seemed approptiate just to smile then and offer my arm to take her out dancing and then perhaps some chestnuts and brandy and the fireworks that would follow until dawn as we celebrated my forth of that special july __________ daark |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
fireworks, indeed !  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks babybel1e |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
indeed! always a pleasure to read the words you use to paint the people and the places...the times and the thoughts.. you're master of the form sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat..humble thanks guy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you should post a poem for all of the months special to you... don't you?  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
could i be april? giggle |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Kewl! One of your best - loved it! Hey, I will take the June slot if it is still open? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll be either October, or December. Both work for me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...oh is july a month too? grin ________________ ms slick..hmmmmmmm yes you MAY...please March right on over here..thanks lady _________________________ ms myst, Juneknow I would like that, thanks and have a happy 4th _______________________ ms sun...you always like those shuddering stormy ones don't you...thanks babe |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Yummy march, april, andddd may every day with you would be a celebration not a hollow-day |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick....I will hold you to that...or hold that against you...well you know what I mean... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in july's bright light he was a temple destroyed by fire teetering on the borrowed landscape of a zen garden edged in weathered planks, she raked him into concentric circles playing the tension between stability and flux like a nawa-shi master. Mmmm... I do love summer. Indigo |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
BEAU-ti-ful ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi... woman on peaceful leash does the weaver of filaments that bind your soul inside dare you to wear his knots there at your edges, to learn of love from the rim of a silken prison  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king...thank you for your soft touch here |
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zeusthamghty Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45west virginia, usa |
very sentual read i want one for myself. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Amazing write as always fine sir, you are the poet's poet! Happy Fourth of July Dark! Rich |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
zues...thanks friend.. ____________ Rich' thanks so much amigo...hope your holiday is amazing as well |
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