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The "Czech" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
The "Czech" Oh, and things just got interesting a jealous boyfriend she says for the first time in years he wants to meet me says... he appreciates me that we have fun and oh things just got more interesting as she patted me on the shoulder with the copy of the book I gave her "The Postman Always Rings Twice" and she doesn't know whats in store for her yet but, I wish I could see the look on her face when she turns those pages when her eyes caress those words when her pupils dilate and her mouth opens provocatively wondering... what ideas I've put into her head something she has already spoken of thought, said, perhaps in jest, no, in anger The "Greek" ne, ne, ne The "Czech" she always seems to have something to take off in front of me she looks away letting my eyes play all over her bare shoulders and more... as I watched her walk away as I watched her hips sway looking over her shoulder to give me a wave Yes, my dear, I was watching you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes, you paint the images well and one can easily see you watching her walk away... nicely done... |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
and she is watching you watch her, as well |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A "nice" double here with While you were sleeping. Well-composed, and I wish the writer the best. Being objectified and put down is no fun, especially when one has done nothing wrong to deserve mistreatment. |
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