First Post, Contrasting Egoes

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Open Poetry #46

First Post, Contrasting Egoes

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

0 posted 2010-07-01 02:35 AM

standing
stark naked
and grinning
sincerely

he bares it all,
and bears it all.

other intricate egoes
so delicately deceive.

an elegant dress
belies a cancerous bosom
but fragile frames
collapse in the shaking.

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

1 posted 2010-07-01 02:40 AM

I'm not quite sure what the tone of this one is (though I did like it a lot), because it seems like it could mean lot of different things to different people, but I have to say, your alteration of clichés was very interesting. Welcome to PiP; I hope you like it here. -Rileigh

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2010-07-01 02:24 PM

Welcome to Passions, Ethern.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-07-01 02:29 PM

yes, welcome!

enjoyed the read, and enjoyed that it can be openly interpreted to mean many things..

zeusthamghty
Junior Member

since 2010-06-20

Posts 45
west virginia, usa

4 posted 2010-07-01 04:30 PM

im with everyone else. nice read and welcome to pip

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