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Open Poetry #46

Still needs a name.

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

0 posted 2010-07-01 02:33 AM

I fell, like always,
and sat down forever.
then my feet fell asleep..
what else could I do,
but poke them?
nothing.
trying again?
nothing.
that must be nice,
numb, dead to the world
lacking pain.
yeah, I thought so,
but then it prickled and stung.
there, the real me,
the one I've always known
agonizing, slowly.
going back to normal.
normal? shaky. weak.
a feeble act,
but it's all I had
so I tried to stand.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-07-01 07:36 AM

~feeling the internal struggle here...very emotive ~

write-on~*~

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