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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I wander dark halls--- to a radio playing American Band! Far from the cadets' meeting, moments of truth repeating. **** When horses go so far they just want to drop, I wonder, do they see their names written in real clouds, with exclamation points? (!) |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo easy1, These work rather well. Bobby |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Ah, you're back with more haiku. That's great, very much fun to read, much appreciated. They both work well. I personally can relate better to the second one about the horses. Have a look at my poem about the birth of a baby horse. I'd like your opinion. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
enjoyed ! |
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