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Dying Soul
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Dying Soul |
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Skilerz Junior Member
since 2010-06-26
Posts 22Malaysia,Negeri Sembilan |
DYING SOUL Had a cold showers of pain, Insanely feeling of loneliness I'm feeling shameless I was always here Not wanting to feel anymore My heart been broken into thousands of pieces, scattered all around the floor My mind is still living in the past with cold blind thoughts of suicide I'm worried that it'll never go away and I'll never learn to love another day Hoping for the clouds to part and new love to mend the heart Blinded by the thoughts of suicidal Self-esteem disappear, killing my soul |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
I hope this poem is not what your really feeling. You are very good at expressing strong emotion but never being able to love another day is not the way to go. Anyway, I appreciate the deep, undisguised feeling that comes through. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all things pass sad write here and I hope it's just a write |
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