Open Poetry #46 |
Before Light |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
It’s early, Before light, before sunrise, Prewaking; Premaking; And yet the noise echoes clear. It’s early, A boy has tears in his eyes, What’s he got, Feels so hot, Mommy cuddles with her dear; “Don’t you cry, Not to worry, Mommy’s here. Gloom Missing my mother today, Oh to be a child in the 1950’s again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know the feelings, only having missed father, sister and special aunts... looking through photos that one can touch and listening to voices of far away. Just doesn't seem the same. M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suffice to say, friend, "me, too." It's amazing how the touch of the cool hand of a mother upon a child's fevered brow is one of the more emotional memories one keeps with them...forever. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Sometimes memories are both painful and wonderful...Thanks for sharing yann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is my husband and mom around 1962 I'm sure he would feel the same. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you all, For taking the time to read and respond. Even though it has been a couple of years, there are times the missing is great. Gloom |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Professor, Your appreciative poem has touched me as well. If any consolation, it is true that hurt lessens over time. The memories always remain warm. My heart goes out to you at the absence of your loved ones. misce' |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sorry for your loss.... My dad passed too not that long ago... I had a dream Last night .. He was trying to tell me something... Hmmm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For Dad, it's going on 22 years; for Mom, going on 18 years. So why do I still hear them both in my head? Because I want to. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Perhaps we were lucky to ride the last wave of true childhood. Ida |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Mothers are special. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed your poem, but unlike the others I don't know what you mean, not from my own experience anyway. My parents both died years ago - 1974 and 1986 I think. However, missing my horse, Flicka (28/04/2002) and my dog, Daisy (18/12/2009) tears me to shreds. Owl |
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