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Open Poetry #46

Pretty Sweet Thing

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-06-25 03:23 AM

I bask in your love.
I delight in your kiss.
I glide in your heart.
I swim in your soul.

I'm rich beyond compare.
Knowing that for me you will always care.
You are my sunrise in the morning.
My stars at night.

You are my fresh morning air.
My cool running spring.
My dew on the flowers.
My pretty sweet thing.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-06-25 01:07 PM

delightful words celebrating one love...enjoyed it.

yann

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2010-06-25 10:03 PM

A lovely sensuous romantic poem Lamar

A pleasure to read.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-06-26 07:16 AM

Deeply romantic. You must have some muse.

Kethry D
Member

since 2010-04-12

Posts 64
Australia

4 posted 2010-06-26 09:41 PM

I liked the first and last stanzas but had some problems with the centre on.

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

ramisf
Member

since 2007-05-17

Posts 93

5 posted 2010-06-27 05:04 AM

Lucky and wealthy is the person who deserves your love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2010-06-29 06:52 PM

Nice...James

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