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Open Poetry #46

Rachel's Requiem

Fade
Junior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane

0 posted 2010-06-24 01:15 PM

the breaking point
her fragile heart:
the fracture aches with pain,

weeps bleeding tears
from unhemmed scars
that ink her lovers name,

behind the wall
she mourns in white:
her bride's gown crimson-stained.

her injured soul-
her broken dreams-
in pieces will remain.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-06-24 02:50 PM

they say pieces are complete in their own right...like keys for unknown locks...

enjoyed your art here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-06-29 06:38 PM

Fine writing...James

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-06-30 10:13 AM

Enjoyed... I think we are all broken and dreams scattered...until we gather up the pieces or find them anew...

liked the writing...

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