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Open Poetry #46

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-06-24 10:40 AM

what whippletree binds my dervish mind
beyond this whisperwill's call
when on your dawning limbs I perch
rivoted without metal pins to pin

and you bring me buckets of your glance
from across an ocean of stone toes
each stepping to my stride before me
ah to bring false witness of my intentions

do you read my mind's ashes, velvet one
with the grooves of your lips to sing
as they roll over my bends and writhes
moansonging rhymes from my application

I turn often to view your windows of sound
from corners of eyes I know you are there
but gone again ahead of my glancing glides
to fold your wings again under shadowed eves

that leave behind only heartbeats of saliva

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daark (highway series)

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-06-24 10:43 AM

WOW

love the deep intricacies of emotion and thought pinned to the images you paint, darkiee~~~~

just lovely~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-06-24 11:39 AM

darkdot..thanks little one for the wow..you smile me

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

3 posted 2010-06-24 11:46 AM

"Human salvation lies in the hands of the creatively maladjusted".. Martin Luther King Jr. I love the daring aspect of this beautiful poem. Well done.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-06-25 11:33 AM

Bastet friend, thanks for the read and comments.

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