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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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0 posted 2010-06-24 07:28 AM

you met me close to heaven upstairs there
at that marriot with the morning behind us
and your woman whiskey was being served
at room temperature, maybe slightly warmer

your eyes spoke an unexpected language
but I recognized the sounds and music
and how your words fit around me in places
as my glances fit your skin like sins

you mentioned my tattoos tasted sweeter
then you had imagined that they would
and you were curious now how I would look
if everywhere you wanted to kiss had ink

and then you blushed at your own boldness
but watched in the mirror as I took advantage
and kept your woman skin thoroughly read
as if each pore was a word or sound or sigh

and the book of you was still being written

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-24-2010 08:06 AM).]

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

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1 posted 2010-06-24 07:47 AM

~love your fiction, daarkie~

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

2 posted 2010-06-24 07:47 AM

A winner as usual. The third stanza is a standout.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-06-24 08:18 AM

Well now, I can't speak to whether or not it is fiction..seems to have a some strong mages that you have drawn on, so I'm thinking there may be as with all good fiction a basis for truth somewhere in there... (chuckling) experience is a great thing...and the mind, when it is as sharp and creative as yours certainly can paint quite the picture....
Enjoyed Sir..as always.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

4 posted 2010-06-24 10:19 AM

darkdot...fiction that left wearbars..on at least one of us..thanks little one

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eb, thank you for the reads friend.

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cpat..yep it is fiction...if I did most of what I write about I would have white hair and tattoos..(whoops), thanks amigo

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

5 posted 2010-06-24 01:39 PM

it was the scribble notes
on the back of her neck,
each one a page
written in a private language,
that blurred the line
between dream and logic;
unraveling the Sande fabric
of her dual existence.

Sounds like the Marriott has a great 'happy hour'.....

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

6 posted 2010-06-24 02:45 PM

ms indi..it might be called something else now.."last resort" or "sordid solutions" or..."sande sandbox" ...due to my fragile political profile I have chosen not to frequent it as often..well since lunch time anyway. thanks dovely one

Sunshine

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7 posted 2010-07-02 03:07 PM

I like how her book isn't finished yet..
and glad that you had a chapter to fulfill.

Interesting stuff, this...

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2010-07-02 03:11 PM

ms sun...always a pleasure to go there in my mind and read those damp pages again...thanks for stopping by ms

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