Open Poetry #46 |
Bull's Eye |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bull's Eye It came to me while laid out for the night, the extremes of punishing thought. Wondering I, in the break of each line, where such moments like these were taught. An end to an end of the means to an end then disappearing as quickly as came. An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth: life's disappointments, its aim. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think I know what you convey here in such perfect poetic form, dear Maureen. And yet, in the end we know that the only answer would be love. Love, M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I agree...the only answer is love..which begets tolerance, which begets understanding... now I'll stop before I start to sound like I am quoting old testament verses with all my begets. :-) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Regrets and ill will can eat us alive can't they? The more we can forgive and forget the more we can place that dart of happiness in the red dot, of our heart. This was great Maureen, thanks for share! Richard xx |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
well wrought poetry ! ~enjoyed!
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