Open Poetry #46 |
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"She's eccentric you know." |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
She's Eccentric You Know Behind clean cupped hands They whisper words low, "What an odd person she is, She's eccentric you know." Wearing an old ragged shirt, With blue jeans cut low, Her hair is uncombed and tumbled, "She's eccentric you know." Her children are sometimes unwashed, With too many pets in tow, She doesn't seem to notice, "She's eccentric you know." Her house is mostly in shambles, Her cleaning doesn't show, She's much too busy living, "She's eccentric you know." Someday they all will gather To hear the pastor's word so slow, "She lived her life for others, She was eccentric you know." Her children in their anguish With their heads hanging low Will hear those words with pride, "She was eccentric you know." And one day there will gladly be Another brow on which to bestow Those words now borne so proudly "She's eccentric you know." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God bless her! She has been busy living and loving others ~ "She's eccentric you know." ![]() Your story played out like reeling Rockwell paintings before my mind! ![]() Thoroughly enjoyed! Love & Light, Linda www.lindadowd.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I knew a lady a lot like that. Loved this. ![]() |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
To Serenity Blaze and Earth Angel: Thank you both so much for reading and enjoying my little poem "She's Eccentric You Know." It's written about a little old lady in my neighborhood who IS very eccentric, but she tries to do for others every day, Bless her! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Nancy, Eccentricities make the world interesting. Bobby |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
It would not be a "world" without them! Thank you for reading my poem. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
enjoyed your poem. Nicely done. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
"She's much too busy living, 'She's eccentric, you know'" So good. ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this a lot - and I'll view people maybe a tiny bit differently now. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
she sounds baller. ![]() Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Kielo, Alison and Viking Metal, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem "She's Eccentric You Know." |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I love this. Poor people are called odd or crazy but the rich are known to be eccentric if they seem odd. I always took to people who were a little different. They make life more interesting. Really enjoyed this . latearrival |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Thank you for your comments, latearrival. The world would be a poorer place without our differences, be they eccentric or not. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What's a little dust on the furniture in comparison to generous acts of love in favour of others? I love this eccentric lady you painted here, very well done. Love, Margherita |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a compliment to your neighbour. They call me that sometimes, but I sure live the way I want to, and don't dance to any drummer but my own. I loved this, and printed it out. |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Margherita and Mysteria; thank you for your comments on "She's Eccentric You Know." There was also a dab here and there of another lady I know. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was lovely and deserves to be rediscovered again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh. I didn't mean to imply I was eccentric. I'm totally blaspheming nuts. *daps* to "dem who dare: ![]() |
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I_am_little New Member
since 2010-06-24
Posts 2 |
I can relate to your poem.Doing things for others.Great obra! |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~very engaging poem~ ![]() |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Earl Brinkman, serenity blaze, I_Am_Little and bel1e, thank you for your comments on my poem "She's Eccentric You Know." I believe it is the "eccentrics" who make our world creative and interesting. If you found a little part of yourself in my poem, that makes it so much the better. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so glad to see this second time around. What an epitaph! Now that I am officially retired, I plan on being eccentric full-time, and hopefully will be remembered that way too. ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Haha, I always said that when I was old and wore my hair white I would do anything I wanted and if called eccentric I would not care in fact be proud. But now I am at that point in life and don't know how to show that side of me.LOL latearrival |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Mysteria and latearrival, thanks for your comments on "She's Eccentric You Know" and I'm glad you liked it. |
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