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Open Poetry #46

Everlasting Memory

zeusthamghty
Junior Member

since 2010-06-20

Posts 45
west virginia, usa

0 posted 2010-06-20 09:21 PM

Everlasting Memory

As I look into the night sky,
I am reminded of your eyes.
Always sparkling!
Always twinkling!
As they do when
You look at me
In wonder and surprise.

Your awe of me is quite amazing.
With the way I first saw you,
You were helpless and you needed me.

I watched you grow.
I taught you to see.
I helped you become
The person you were meant to be.

I love you with all of my heart,
And now could never let us be part.

You and I are always connected.
And I need to know
That you will always be protected.

For your creation,
Will always be.
An everlasting memory.
I love you always and forever

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

1 posted 2010-06-21 12:59 PM

What a lovely tribute to someone you love (a child?). I think this kind of poem is always a pleasure to read. It expresses sentiments that we all fell but sometimes can't put into words. But you have done a fine job of it.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-06-21 01:22 AM

^Yes, you have done a fine job. As for protection, we all have to trust in God from time to time, and part of true love is a modicum of trust and freedom. (Did you mean to type "never be apart", though?)

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

3 posted 2010-06-21 10:45 AM

I remember when you wrote this one! Still love it, hun!

Guess my mountain air brings out your poetry.

*hugs*

Tamma

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