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Every Tender Place
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Every Tender Place |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Succulent, and oh so sweet! Passionately penned, BC~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely romantic tender poem Bill, It makes me think of my youthful years, Well done my friend. Lindsay |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful!  ~Amaryllis |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A very beautiful poem, Bill. M |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
how lovely~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Beautiful Bill! Another classic from the master!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your intention to live this love to the core is very beautifully expressed, dear Bill! Love, Margherita |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Now that truly does look like a Hallmark Card. Well done Mr. C |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Touching. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Tender and touching. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
delightful. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is very nice. I wonder if "loss" wouldn't sound better than "lost" in the first line of the second strophe? Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - written with passionate thoughts from the depths... LindsayP - You'll always be young my friend... Amaryllis - thank you... Maureen - I'm glad you liked it... bel1e - thank you 'Baby Girl' Richy - You always have words to inspire... Margherita - You read my thoughts... Toerag - good to see you and appreciate the reply... icebox - thank you for stopping by for a read... Earl Brinkman - Tender it is... Lamar Cole - Appreciate your reply... 2islander2 - glad you came by... Bobby - thank you for the reply. I was trying to convey that inside one is lost, and not a loss. Hope that makes sense... vandana - always nice to see your reply... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this one, especially |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very tender. A |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill: This one is different from all of your other writing. I feel this one searched your feelings from way down within. Nicely written. Ariana |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Bill, this is so lovely. Filled with tender passion! |
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