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Open Poetry #46

Walk With Me

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2010-06-20 05:24 PM

Walk With Me
I want to make it happened
I want to take your hand
I want to make it right
I want to take your heart away
Walk with me
Sy these words of love
Take my hand
Make me smile
With your love
Let our love grow
Don't let it go
Life is short
Who knows
Where we could be?
We even can say goodbye
Never meet again
Who knows
We stay forever like this
So this is time to say the words
Of love
Come and walk with me

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-06-20 07:23 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This poem works very well Hon.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2010-06-20 07:37 PM

vandana - it would be my pleasure to walk with you...

BC

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-06-21 01:03 AM

Radiant, like starlight on the unperfect beach.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2010-06-21 07:07 AM

"Where we could be?
We even can say goodbye
Never meet again
Who knows
We stay forever like this
So this is time to say the words
Of love
Come and walk with me"

lovely thoughts, Vandana

M

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2010-06-21 01:34 PM

What is better then walking hand in hand with someone you love???

Wonderful.
Richard xx

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2010-06-21 04:49 PM

beautiful invitation, there is nothing more than that.

regards

yann

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