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Open Poetry #46

Time

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

0 posted 2010-06-20 05:03 AM

TIME

This day is happy
for nothing though gold coins of
sunlight bounce off the air
the three phases of time are
all one white field: the present

love, honey gold on
the tongue, split-second orgy
brief as the hawk’s light
shadow, blessing all that flies,
birds’ wings bending to what’s asked

though I only fly
with mind the day stays behind
the moment changing
into slow evening pastures
where tomorrow never waits

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

1 posted 2010-06-20 02:23 PM

Man are you ever talented! Once again.. loving this.. fresh descriptions,
`gold coins
of sunlight bounce off the air`
..just fabulous.
Best~Amaryllis

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-06-20 07:49 PM

Love the idea, so many great lines, and such a joy to read~

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

3 posted 2010-06-20 09:24 PM

You have a talent with words...good job!

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

4 posted 2010-06-21 12:57 PM

Excellent, excellent. All good, yet I think my favorite here is the shadow of the aerie... a true lesson in time.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2010-06-21 07:58 PM

quote:
the moment changing
into slow evening pastures

How enthralling! Wonderfully creative.

Love,
Margherita

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