Open Poetry #46 |
The Poets of Passion |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Poets of Passion My favorites now return to flight Saucily tanged, urged to alight Amid blue skies of luscious cite Should I beg them, write, men, write. Liken to Jays, Tangs or Orioles Or Scarletts that scream in whole “feed me, feed me” but lo, behold They feed me, feed me, in total, by toll. Negligent, I shall succumb To dreams what would benumb For I am finger to their thumb Sheathing the beat of their drum, drum, drum. Ah, yes, my favorites are now hither Wording words that claim by slither Around my genus that they claim For Poets they are, by no other name. They proclaim my body held by cede I proclaim their words…by selfish need. ~*~ Smiling here... the boys of summer, winter, spring and fall are home again. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
what a terrific homecoming~~the boys of summer, indeed ~*~* XOXOXOX
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling at you and knowing.. all seasons, they come around in full circle MommaK. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Nice. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling too* |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
You are lucky that you have a variey of boys this summer. Living in the city we have mostly pigeons. I guess they are the bowery boys of our area. The city prohibits us from feeding them and considers them pests but I like them. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I loved the rhythm of reading this. I also love the use of "benumb". This is one of my favorites of yours sunshine. Awesome work. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I use the word "benumb" occasionally when speaking of Toerag. Of course, when I use it, it is two words |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I use the word "numbnuts" occasionally when speaking of Balladeer. Of course, when I use it, it is two words. This was a great poem honey, I enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well ma'am... may you enjoy indeed the summer and the "boys" it might bring... nice to read you m'friend |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...watching you watching is always a treat..enjoyed you here |
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