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Toerag
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0 posted 2010-06-15 10:51 AM


We all know 'Deer' loved to write
Gave him pleasure, pure delight.
He writes with passion, just can't quit
Jotting down poetic script.

He wrote about Toe on his foot
Then wrote about me in his book
I thought it nice to be about me
Then read the title: "Toebotomy"

He wrote on walls on floors and desks
On his face and legs and chest
His bathroom walls were quite a sight
He wrote from morning thru late night

He wrote on everything he could,
Paper, metal-bits of wood
Then on his body, every part
Around his neck down to his heart

Some places where he'd left quotations
You'll have to have imagination
When he'd walk his gut would wiggle
And you could read poetic scribble

Sky writing poems about Toerag,
With his memory going bad,
He stopped the plane to dot an "i"
And never finished his last line.



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latearrival
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1 posted 2010-06-15 03:44 PM


I am reading. Think  this is a repeat?  stilll good.
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2 posted 2010-06-19 11:41 PM


This is funny.  

A

Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
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3 posted 2010-07-25 10:05 PM


"He wrote about Toe on his foot
Then wrote about me in his book
I thought it nice to be about me
Then read the title: "Toebotomy"

Ha ha ha! Some people talk just to make noise, some people write about their toes :-))

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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4 posted 2010-07-25 10:30 PM


LOL Very funny! Loved the rhymes.
Kat >^..^<

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2010-07-26 02:42 AM



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