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Open Poetry #46
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2010-06-14 11:24 AM

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With a worm in his mouth
At the corner McDonald’s
The robin in summer


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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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1 posted 2010-06-14 11:31 AM

Exactly! How do you do that.. I can see the hot summer day, feel the heatwaves from the asphalt, smell the diesel and grease competeing with fresh-mown grass.. all in one poem.. because you placed the robin there.. Wonderful!
~Amaryllis
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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Southeastern USA
2 posted 2010-06-15 12:36 PM

LOL - that is definitely a french fry!
Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-06-15 10:29 PM

This was clever and deserves to be read by others.
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