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I Sing For You
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I Sing For You |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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When you're gone, I sing for you. I put my hair up and dance around- I kick my shoes off and touch the sky where soft grass and dusk are abound. I end up at the edge of the creek singing to the willows and the stones, harmonizing with the trickle-tickle, a duet in A minor with sad undertones. When you're gone, I miss you- the trees, creek, flowers and sky... the grass, birds, and the garden do too but we all sing instead of cry. And when I say 'good night' to the moon, I sing in my sleep 'cause you'll be home soon. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Very nice. I like the flow of this Dixie. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh this is very sweet! A happy little read, showing true love that is safe and secure.. thank you for sharing this today  Best~Amaryllis |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...the beauty and joy is in the state of mind...James |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Sweet. .thanks for the peek into such a delightful moment ... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Beautiful words and thoughts here, very much enjoyed. Rick |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And when I say 'good night' to the moon, I sing in my sleep 'cause you'll be home soon. Dear Dixie, am I correct in sensing a happier spirit in your poems lately. That is a lovely poem Dixie, a pleasure to read, Keep them coming. Love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
touching and beautiful, your work is dense and true, I love it. regards yann |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was a treat to read. Thank you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
passing shadows - a woman that sings is a happy woman. Nice write... BC |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dixie, I always thought of you as the most wonderful country singer, your poems always having the perfect balance and pitch. I can so see you singing this. What a nice vision that really is. Richard xx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks guys and gals glad you enjoyed! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed the song...thank you. Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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