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The Man Within
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The Man Within |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The man within cringes at her angry words like icy shards against his heart but he doesnt let her see... The man within longs for the warmth of her loving arms around him but he doesnt let her see... The man within stares in the dark wondering where her heart is but he doesnt let her see... The man within wonders if she'd have stayed if he had only let her see The man within |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A poem that stands out from others. Effective use the phrase `the man within`. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hard to dig deeper when you feel you're hitting bottom time and again. You expressed yourself so well and I enjoyed reading your poem. |
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