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Into The Red Dress World
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Into The Red Dress World |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Into The Red Dress World Woman in the red dress you are exciting me, your high heals displaying your legs so stylishly. Woman in the red dress you are arousing me, your dress seeming to caress your body soft & sensually. Woman in the red dress are you inviting me to come and give you a whirl, dare I choose to enter into your red dress world. JamesLee 07June 2010 |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was nice. The last stanza was especially good. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wonderful.. this has such music to it  . ~A |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
She sounds very enticing James. Lindsay |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Nice. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, Of course you may enter into her red dress world. That's what red dresses are all about. Bobby |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Cross "world" with "whirl" and you might get "whorl", so good for a poetical outlet, too. A smooth write... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so lovely and sensual, splendid poem. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think this woman enjoys the reaction she has caused from you with her red dress! Very lovely romantic write, dear James! Love, Margherita |
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