Open Poetry #46 |
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Silk Skin Apostrophes. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. ![]() |
I crawled down your skin: a hush voice shiver on your spine unafraid to taste with wanting tongue, something new because I knew the flavor would be romance we were love that night exploding into thousands of colors to light your eyes making midnight seem the brightest hour of a new day we each burned with heat only the other could calm with cool fingers painting designs of sigh on our skin I blew hot breath and spoke with gentle words and you made happy-feeling woman groans that vibrated your skin drum chest beating rhythmically with cold night desire awaiting satiation your hair stuck to your face with sweat more mine than yours, but ours nonetheless and your arch back gasp made room for hands to hold on hold on to this without ever letting go. ____________________________________ (blueprint to happiness - series) Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
So tender, passionate and descriptive without devolving into crass language.. nicely done, Viking ![]() . ~A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you very much, A-dawg. ![]() Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderfully written, you've improved quite a lot since my last visit and it's good to read you again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Passionate poetry at it's best!! |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
I have missssssed you you always leave me with an arch back gasp kind regards Boshii2 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very HOT! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you K. That means a lot. Thanks Blues! ![]() Boshii.... thanks. I wouldn't even be posting if you hadn't asked me to. Thanks PS! ![]() |
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