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Something Mystical
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Something Mystical |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Something mystical happened today. I felt your touch. Even though you're far away. I felt your hands upon my face. It seemed as though your sweet lips. I could taste. It seemed as if I could feel your embrace. It took me to a wonderful place. Because even when you're far away. I feel your love in every way. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's indeed love's magic, dear Lamar. Very nice work. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too have felt that touch, and you described it beautifully. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Aw, I think that`s so nice!  . ~A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
This is great and I love it, and it makes me feel good... thanks a lot yann |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Reminds me of one of my favorite 80's tunes from Translator... "Everywhere That I'm Not." That was the first thing to pop into my head, and that's not such a bad thing. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice write |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Quite a romantic poem Lamar, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
It gave me a warm fuzzy feeling; I really enjoyed it. This was beautifully written, with a romantic soul. Bravo. |
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