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Open Poetry #46

Inside My Head

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2010-01-17 05:53 PM

I'm sitting here locked inside my head,
Unraveling every little thread.
One last risk to take,
And in the end it all may break.
Can't fight the tears that ain't coming,
Same old rhythm is drumming.
Bleed to know you're alive,
All you can do is survive.
Tell myself I won't miss you,
Though it isn't true.
Remember what it feels like to hold you,
That's one thing I'd love to do.
As I sit here locked inside my head,
Unraveling every single little thread.

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

1 posted 2010-01-20 10:03 PM

Your talent sure impresses me.
Sadness and loneliness speaks to me here!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2010-01-21 11:58 AM

Hi, Hot Flakes. The angst and inner turmoil reaches out and grabs this reader by the solar plexus. You have an adept way of pulling one right into your world. That takes talent.

May the smile return to your heart and eyes. As 'they' say, "You can't keep a good man down for long."

EA
www.lindadowd.com

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (01-21-2010 12:36 PM).]

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