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Don't loose your balloon
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Don't loose your balloon |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
If you ever have a balloon and it slips and floats away you'll find all your happiness has gone just look up smile and say my happiness is on a journey its flight has just begun think of all the sights it sees as it floats off to the sun my happiness will come back to me though I don't know when or how I'll find out when I smile again I'll just have to wait for now |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely, uplifting poem, kundanesh. Ida |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Aw, this is great stuff! I would say definitely put it in the publish pile. As for balloons, I've let a standard small helium balloon go and watched it through binoculars until I am pretty sure it popped, although it was almost out of sight by that time.  As for Happiness, all I can try to do is not be so manic-depressive... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice |
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