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Open Poetry #46

breakfast haiku

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-06-02 04:50 AM

Coffee and pancakes
mix well in the mouth, and stars
reel above the plain.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-06-02 11:26 AM

Very lovely ... I guess you enjoy an early breakfast!

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2010-06-03 06:47 AM

Breakfast is a favorite theme of mine.
Fine Hiaku

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-06-06 01:59 PM

Thank you, Margherita and ThisDiamond, for your kind words. Yes, often early... and a good theme, too!

I haven't been replying to many comments, but 'tis a sleepy Sunday afternoon here.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2010-06-06 10:20 PM

Making me hungry...James

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2010-06-07 12:32 PM

Yes save one for me Easy1,

It makes me feel hungry.

Lindsay

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

6 posted 2010-06-07 01:15 AM

An early hearty breakfast always sit well with me..good job..ww

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

7 posted 2010-06-07 01:44 AM

How very original to mix taste and sight images. I really like it, especially it's senuality. You have captured the spirit of haiku.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

8 posted 2010-06-07 08:53 AM

Must be a cowboy =)

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2010-06-08 01:23 PM

wonderful, I love pancakes with banana or chocolate, ate a lot while travelling in asia...Your poem is wonderful,a very enjoyable piece.

regards

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2010-06-14 01:54 AM

I like seeing the stars at breakfast - which is a good thing as it happens so often here.

I really like this.

Alison

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

11 posted 2010-06-15 03:25 AM

Calming :-)

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