Open Poetry #46 |
trails |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
kissed by fantasy I begin my sagas climb along antiquated trails tracking faint sighs through a distance until snowy moonlight mellowed with the rising bleus of dawn pausing only for to think a second near the cool lonesome stream leaving little time for thought of eat or drink & living flashed like a butterflies passing spirit in the night alive only to begin dying silence stalked on the glades of dales death shaded slightly by withered winter trees that little helped against the penetrating breeze there I wove a coat of warm candled dreams which announced on tongues of secret rhythms other nights rolled around in spice of thyme fighting dear life and limb across deep nervous chasms while within the blood brown grass fought the blizzard whites and 'ol Wisdom of his years said something but no one could hear him |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very nicely written. I like the shaping on the page, too. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale...it is wonderful to read you again...I've missed your way with words |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thank you: Thank you easy1 and welcome to passions... and thank you sis (martie) I caught at least one of your poems... Very very nice... I could've, should've wrote it too. ha ha! You know I love your outlaw ways with words. dale |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"outlaw way with words" Love the thought of that, Dale. I don't write near as many of them as I'd like ... sometimes they get stuck inside, ya know? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome ending there I always love your shapes, so after reading I can ponder the words and gaze at the outlines, kinda like clouds that turn into dragons and butterflies and teddy bears |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Dixie, So nice to see you... Still dreamin' huh..? Oh, Martie what can I say..? I'm just a sucka for outlaws and can't help myself... low on willpower or something.... yup, I guess it's just one of those things... *smirk* best friends best finds dale |
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