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Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
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0 posted 2010-06-01 05:01 AM

Wisp

Thoughts filter through
clutched memories of
love and loss.

A heart beats around
smiles and tears,
given without pretense.

Love,
a hesitant, timid little wisp,
beckons within the depth
of your longing eyes.

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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
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1 posted 2010-06-01 05:10 AM

This is lovely.. spare and eloquent. Great write!
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2010-06-01 07:04 AM

Very eloquent.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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3 posted 2010-06-01 07:24 AM

quote:
Love,
a hesitant, timid little wisp,
beckons within the depth
of your longing eyes.


Sehr schön ausgedrückt!

Love,
Margherita  
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