Open Poetry #46 |
epithalamions lost |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
epithalamions lost Perhaps the very best poem is the last blank page by frosted moonlight, in these empty rooms of mirrors reflecting only the heavy cloak of dim mortality and finely crafted illusions. Solitude dons the guise of peace where love has shed its deadly-soft skin of permanence. - b. e. adams (5/30/2010) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (05-30-2010 10:21 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh I could never write these feelings so well, and yea, I can relate. It is always such a pleasure to read you, dreampoet~ |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
This poem has something very "Zen" about it -- the blank page in the moonlight, etc. I love your minimalist approach. Your poem is like a work of modern art with a very subtle message. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Epithalamions...had to look the word up, so I learned something while reading this extraordinary poem. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Bruce, good for us that your page did not remain blank! Such refined poetry you gift us with. Love, Margherita |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
You write such great poetry and I learned a new word. Thank goodness for the dictionary!! ooxx Marti
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Greatly crafted words with deep emotions. Pleasure read indeed. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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