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Magical Night
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Magical Night |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
What a magical night. I drowned in your caress. I'll always remember how cute you looked. In your silk mini dress. Pretty long legs. All lovely and tan. Looking so good. You could light up a baseball stand. When you walked. All the guys' heads did turn. For a moment with you. They would walk through fire. And get burned. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
She must be some woman! I could feel your passion. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Lamar, This is pretty nice poem. However, what is a "baseball stand", is that a "baseball park", or is it a place where they sell baseballs? You could also just say "ball park". Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Lamar, I love the images of the poem...Sexy side, long legs can make crazy but love can be something else isn't it ? Keep on the good work... regards yann |
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