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Brooks M Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19California |
The knight in shining armour, the Prince Charming, the holder of the naive girl's dream There are no more of these They do not exist but in your dreams you silly girl When you were young you believed in the movies and the fairy tale WAKE UP!!! He will not come The one your dreams promised you There is not one so perfect as your dreams deceived you HOW!!!! Perfection is not in the makeup of any human being be they male or female.... HAHAHA but I have found him and he does exist... My Michael Brooks M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, then, Brook, to your Michael!  Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Brooks...welcome to the Pipzoo,, we all believed in the prince or princess on the white horse that rides with us off into the sunset..suspect the white horse or metal horse if more realistic and just riding it the better agenda. |
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Brooks M Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19California |
LOL... thanks Dark Stranger.. I did believe in the motorcycle part and that one worked out..LOL |
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Brooks M Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19California |
Thank you Sunshine... To my Michael ;-) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
nicely done, conflict between dreams and reality will always be...Thanks for the enjoyable read. yann |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Oh to have given up and then find that special person is one of life's uncanny gifts of grace...thanks for sharing..ww |
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Brooks M Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19California |
Thank you Yann and WW for the comments... Much appreciated |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
They do exist, not just in fairy tales. It's the love you have for somebody that creates that knight or that maiden. you overlook the things that aren't perfect, nobody is perfect except me. I'm unique, like everyone else. Love is in the eye of the beholder, and the beholder sees only the things that create the love in one's heart. Love is blind, but being blind brings out the other senses. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Bravo, Toe! Don't you enjoy fresh perspectives, Brooks? |
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Brooks M Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19California |
Thanks guys and yes I do appreciate the fresh perspectives...always nice |
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