Open Poetry #46 |
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Bones Looks After Gwendolyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Bones girlfriend Gwendolyn does the bump and grind down at the “Gentleman’s Club” here in the hood. She’s good at it, and popular with the clientele. Bones always goes with her to make sure the crowd never gets out of hand. Bones is known at the club, and everyone knows he always carries his knife. Bones never has any trouble taking care of Gwendolyn. Bobby |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Yo Bobby, Bones never has trouble because he's the man! Fun read.ww |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks WW, Bones wishes that was always the case. He's very glad for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
everyman has his Gwendolyn he feels the need to defend. It's the White Knight instinct in most men, kicking in. Bones is a Lion. Jeff |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Jeff, For your kind words. That could be it. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Bobby, it is kind of a strange world for me but it is a reality, thanks for sharing. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm happy if you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
It may not be the best world for anyone but Bones is a survivor. This poem made for an interesting read. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
It's a fine-line to what we consider tresspassing. Bones definitly has a different view of "personal space" when it comes to Gwendolyn. For some it's just a job... nothing personal... but woe be to the man who takes advantage beyond prescribed boundries. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, I’m glad you found the poem of interest. It does Bones good to look after Gwendolyn, as he doesn’t always have a chance to look after himself. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Andrew, Now isn't that the way it should be, the boy looking after the girl. Honor is alive, and well in all socioeconomic groups. Bobby |
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