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What is love but a sack of lead?
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What is love but a sack of lead? |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
What is love, but a sack of lead? Under the willow tree The young girl said. What is love, but a sack of lead? When the man cries From what she said. What is love, but a sack of lead? He asked when they would be to-get-ther She said baby, it'll be never What is love, but a sack of lead? Under the willow tree The young man said What is love, but a sack of lead? Something I'd purchase The old man said. What is love? A sack of lead. "Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it." |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
LOL (will have to find a site graphic for that): The phrase would be more germaine were one to say "Sex is a sack of lead". Hopefully things will get better. Will have to find my American Baeuty CD... A worthwhile read, although composed at some cost I am sure. Thanks.  |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
..I'm extremely confused by your comment. BUT! It wasn't inspired by real life events. |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
If that's not the truth... It's easier to just fall into 'like' Good write. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Love is a path to the heart that knows its own way. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Adorable ..... has a ciuntry song ring to it.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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