Open Poetry #46 |
Learning lifes secret |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I feel your heartache and your pain I read your words and hold back tear Your perfect once now holds its stain And demons of the mind appear We’ve all our choices and our roads We all can laugh at life and chance And though some tears our path erodes Up further with the mind can glance Each day will lead into tomorrow A new day brings more chances by To rid the pain or build the sorrow Life’s the classroom where we try Today let’s learn to live our best To find that path that makes us smile Accepting that our time will test And that the road may change each mile Let’s say hello to strangers there let’s find a smile that gives us joy The love within then let us share And every day enjoy |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
"Today let’s learn to live our best To find that path that makes us smile Accepting that our time will test And that the road may change each mile " Excellent words to live by. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I ever want to feel good, I reach out and read your words, Rick. You never fail me. Those first four lines? Priceless! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
What soothing words! I felt like I got a hug. Thanks I needed that... ebm |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi There Rick Good to read you again...so beautiful and so true... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Andrew, thanks for your reply, good you could visit and leave your comment. Hi James, always good to get your reply, thank you. Dear Sunshine, lovely to see you here my friend, very nice to have you visit and share some words, thank you. Hi Lee, been a long time, nice to share this little piece, thank you for your reply and visit my friend. To you all my friends, again thank you very much for your visit here, much appreciated. Rick Dear EBM, consider yourself hugged, lovely reading your reply my friend, thanks for that. |
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